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Deus ex animus

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God lies in the mind,



Thoughts swirl 'round, ever so fast,

sentences shatter, never to last,

images fade, never to return,

bonds left alone, ready to burn.



If God lies in the mind, in imagination and ideas,

Then how does god not know of the enormous seas,

of voices and screams, unheard and scared,

crumbling under the weight they always beared.



For it is God that lies within our brain,

ignorant and reluctant to hear our pain,

we scream and shout, hoping for a clue,

to the answer for what it is we have to do.
they say god is only in our mind,
then why can he still not hear our pain?
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hardcore-introvert's avatar
I'm not going to comment on the whole God thing XD. You've taken a a very definitive stance here and expressed it well (except for a few spelling errors: awnser vs. answer, etc.). The short length of the poem gives it strength; my only complaint is that I felt as if the rhythm stumbled a little on the very last line, which dented the force of the verse. You've defenitely improved since the last time I saw your writing ;)